In Relation to Boyd

• Dante emphasizes the slowness with which he is walking
• Stream is said to bend the grass that surrounds it

In Relation to Wilstach

• Repetition of “slowly” emphasizes the slow nature of Dante’s walk more so than in other translations
• Illustration does not depict the woman, only Dante, Virgil, and Statius
• The word “dark” is also repeated to describe the water
• The sight of the woman’s eyes is once again referred to as a “gift”
• Dante does not mention faith when he describes how the forest has begun to challenge his beliefs
• Mention of Parnassus again