In Relation to Wilstach

• Rays of the sun are said to be ascending to the West
• Direct reference to war
• Rather obscurely mentions “Father’s name”, which could reference either Adam or God
• Lone tree is described akin to a skeleton with “funeral arms”
• Saints are singing about some unclear “thou” as they surround the tree (no mention of the Gryphon)

In Relation to Langdon

• Reference to Troy
• Greater focus on the Saints’ warnings about Dante’s loss of sight
• Beatrice is said to be guarding the entire team—not just the chariot