In Relation to Boyd

• Words are described as “godly” in the first line
• Stream is again mentioned to be on the left-hand side
• Extra information has been added in parentheses in order to fit the rhyme scheme
• The red and yellow on the ground is more specifically referred to as flowers or “blooms”
• Dante confirms that he “understands” the meaning of the woman’s speech rather than just remarking on being able to hear her
• The flowers the woman is carrying are described to grow on the highland with no seed
• Stream compared to
• Dante is simply referred to as “new”
• Plants are said to “impregnate” the breeze, which the rest of the earth can then “conceive and bear”

In Relation to Wilstach

• Soil is said to “breathe” its scent
• Changes Proserpina’s name to Persephone (likely more familiar for most readers)
• Describes sight of the woman’s eyes as a “gift”
• Parnassus is mentioned again